at the mountain’s peak
poems alive without breathing
words tossed to the wind
they hang in the mist seeping
so completely we forget
–a Renga written with Elizabeth Moore
more breathtaking views from the poets at one deep breath
Tag: renga
May 21 2007
one deep breath: viewpoint
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Nov 16 2006
more renga
pale fingers of aspen
pin-pricked bubble of blood
after October leaves
chills seep into thoughts leaving
bare skin craving winter’s embrace
-a collaboration between Carolyn and myself
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Nov 15 2006
one deep breath: renga
This weeks prompt at one deep breath is friends & companions. As an added exercise we were encouraged to write a renga, which is traditionally written in collaboration with someone else. The form consists of a haiku followed by a couplet of two seven syllable lines. My good friend Elizabeth collaborated with me on the following renga.
songs speak to hearts
words that could have been rain
if shy lips had spoke
they gaped, drenched, at the rainbows
steam rising from the space between
words that could have been rain
if shy lips had spoke
they gaped, drenched, at the rainbows
steam rising from the space between
more haiku and renga from the poets at one deep breath.
another renga made with a different friend
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